Poor Girl Britney

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Hollywood's most hated website doesnt miss a chance to be nasty with words. I have watched this site since its inception and feel pity for them trying to cash in on the misfortunes of others. Britney needs some sympathy and some more empathy from us...at least think of her songs we have enjoyed, and bear with her.
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Hollywood's most hated website doesnt miss a chance to be nasty with words. I have watched this site since its inception and feel pity for them trying to cash in on the misfortunes of others. Britney needs some sympathy and some more empathy from us...at least think of her songs we have enjoyed, and bear with her.
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Its almost one year since Britney girl made her problems public and the media celebrated it. I do think she is too immature to have a baby, but now that she does, its better to let her deal with it rather than stand apart making criticisma on record that the baby will probably read in later years.
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Just when it seemed the headlines couldn’t be wrenched from the late Anna Nicole Smith, the only possible successor stepped up her game. Who gets Anna Nicole’s body? Her money? Who’s the baby-daddy? What killed her? Who cares! Britney Spears shaved her head
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Whatever her problems, it’s quite clear Britney is in need of psychiatric care to prevent her life spiralling out of control any further. She is totally unhinged, suffering from post-natal depression, and is in danger of losing her two sons to the sponging dancer that she married if she’s not careful. What is even more sad is that no one appears to be stepping in to help her
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Is this the final straw for Britney Spears apologists? Spears left a rehab center in Antigua, flew back to Hollywood, then had a crying breakdown in her car, went into a salon and shaved her head bald. Then she went to a tattoo parlor in her distraught mood and got a pair of kissing lips inked on her right wrist. (video and pics here).

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